chapter 1 page 6: (February 26th, 2010, 2:22 pm)

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Pedes, February 26th, 2010, 2:28 pm

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I'm pretty sure I had some witty comment containing the reasons why I didn't manage to update this page as fast as I wanted, but the terrible headache prevents me from thinking.
I'm not really proud of this page, but I can work on the next one now.
I think I should change bubbles to sparkles...

Also: until mid April the updates are set to irregular. That is, if everything fails I'll update on weekends but I want to try to do more than one page a week now so it would read better (it sucks when there are only a few pages).

Uh yeah...
I'll update voting incentive tomorrow... *head explodes*

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n (Guest), February 26th, 2010, 4:51 pm


poor head... *collects pieces after the explosion and tries to fit them back together*

about the page:
1) SHE'S SPARKLING! 0_______0
2) the... uh, bard? looks quite proud of himself in the bottom left panel XD
3) one thing I don't like about the page - though I only spotted it when I looked at the thumbnail on the homepage, as I can't see the whole page on my screen (too tall) - is that the blank space at the top is a little too tall/wide, and that, together with the bottom left panel being adjacent to the edges of the page, makes the layout kinda... fall down. it just doesn't agree with everything my mum has taught me about composition and how frames should always be a bit wider at the bottom to prevent that sort of 'falling' effect. on the other hand, I know manga layouts don't necessarily work according to our european ideas... so maybe it's ok after all :)

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