Ah, who cares about rectangles!!!?

I'm trying to get more comfortable with the pages at the same time so the style might have shifted slightly, but it hasn't been that consistent in the first place. I guess I'm getting there, as Martessa - the waitress - at last looks like I wanted her to. Also, partly because of the pages with all the cameos which I've put much attention to, I don't feel like going back to the very simplified style - I know it's all in the details so you most probably don't see much of the difference.. Ah, nevermind.
Still untoned, still busy.

If you vote here you'll see a sketch I am quite proud about and I'm considering making a small painting out of it. God, he's HOT!

[EDIT] I've got voices that the last two pages are somewhat confusing; I changed the dialog to less vague, I hope it helps. Yes, I really DO listen to critique :D