chapter 01 page 16: (27 Jul 2009 03:23 pm)

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Pedes, 27 Jul 2009 03:23 pm

D:

Late, ugly and untoned. The latter will be fixed soon.

I'm hopeless D:

[EDIT] Typo fixed and page toned.

[EDIT 2] Forgot to pun new incentive, now it's up! Click the "vote" button above the page to see a WIP that might turn NSFW...

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User Comments:

n (Guest), 28 Jul 2009 04:16 am


fix the typo while toning:
"coutrecy" should be "courtesy".
other than that, I like the expressions in the two panels in the middle :)

GoldenGal42, 28 Jul 2009 09:58 am


I really like the second panel. A very well done to you.

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